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ujangkuskus
ujangkuskusLv132yr
2022-06-17 01:58

Seriously,I think the author don't even know where the plot going, it's allover the place, sudden time skip without development and without reason, no character development, no world building, I can tolerate bad grammar but the plot, my goodness the plot are painful to read.

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