Review Detail of Webzayne in Reincarnation as a Peerless Martial God / Cultivator with Sharingan!

This needs some editing. Some quotations start, and never end. It gets hard to distinguish the dialogue from the narration. "This is how it should start, and end; when someone is talking." 'This is the standardized notation for how thoughts(Internal Dialogue) are communicated in published stories.' -I'm not quite sure what this is, I think you use it to indicate internal dialogue, but usually, there isn't a closing mark, so...- There's some rough grammar, and poor word choice but it isn't a bad fic.