Review Detail of Nahllo in The Untouchable Son-In-Law: The Master Peregrine

What in the world is this doing on the top novels. The way it's written is so awful, it just made me want to drop this faster and faster. Like what is wrong with the way the character talk to each others? "Finn Taylor this Finn Taylor that Yvette Larson this Yvette Larson that" like jesus christ innovate at some point. Couldn't even tell you how bad the plot is even if I tried.