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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv53yr
2021-04-10 05:18

Cliché Title should be "I have the memories of an Alchemy Emperor in my head" The reason being, he doesn't have the guy in his head, only his memories. I was hoping for some funny interactions that make him look schizophrenic. Anyways Fatty Bestfriend - Check Little Sister - Check Little Sister is really talented but has some disease thing - Check MC is trash - Check MC is poor - Check MC gets cheat - Check The cliché's all align just as foretold by the last 100 novels I've read. The only difference being that the novel takes place on earth, after some sword power killed most of the population, with the majority of the survivors being Chinese, shock. MC touched a painting and gained and old mans memories. MC was trash (or average) and is suddenly becoming stronger kind of fast. He immediately shows off in his next class by talking about thing that nobody in the world has seen before, and is currently in research like some professional, of course this all comes from his memories. New thing is that there's tech, referring Qi and shit to bioenergy. Wondering where this will lead too. So far I've seen most of this crap before, most of the other reviews here are just emoji spam or irrelevant guessing. MC Shows off stupidly - Check

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daremetochoosemyna
daremetochoosemynaLv13

I don't know... this cliche is better than system cliche though :D

Matrixkrock
MatrixkrockLv5

Wow only the chinese survives??!!!! Well it only makes sense since since the first human was chinese. Also China is at the centre of the earth and amd even the sun revolves around it. All those science, history and geography we learned, that's bs. I dont know why they are lying to us. hmmm

MikeN
MikeNLv14

I like how seriously you took this review. I wouldn't do this for any novel I didn't really like.👌 ***Spoilers*** I would like to pick a few Nits. 😒 He didn't touch the painting. It was floating above a weapon fragment. In a Virtual State that only he could see. And looking at it closely was all he did for it to turn to a stream and fly into his head. Second, Bioenergy is what is consumed to make Qi to cultivate with at low levels. Third, by the late chapter 30s after reaching level 8 he found the 'Godhead' in his mind with the painting sealing it. Thus the Old Man is probably still sealed inside, waiting for him to power up enough to unseal him.

needleworshipper
needleworshipperLv4

Are you questioning the superiority of CCP mandate education? What right do you have to question the CCP when university in America teaches that there are more than 2 ***es, and a man can be a woman and a woman can be a man?

Matrixkrock:Wow only the chinese survives??!!!! Well it only makes sense since since the first human was chinese. Also China is at the centre of the earth and amd even the sun revolves around it. All those science, history and geography we learned, that's bs. I dont know why they are lying to us. hmmm
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yahya_ishaq
yahya_ishaqLv13

How much did the ccp pay you 😂😂😂

needleworshipper:Are you questioning the superiority of CCP mandate education? What right do you have to question the CCP when university in America teaches that there are more than 2 ***es, and a man can be a woman and a woman can be a man?
LucidDreamer
LucidDreamerLv5

such big gal for you to talk .. its author is Chinese it obvious . its same everywhere why are you using ur western idiotic way and do you really think the world revolve around you people ?? in your games arab countires are terrorist zones and in your apocalypse movies it was always USA who always stands as last line of deference .. and Russia are always the main reason for world chaos ..

Matrixkrock:Wow only the chinese survives??!!!! Well it only makes sense since since the first human was chinese. Also China is at the centre of the earth and amd even the sun revolves around it. All those science, history and geography we learned, that's bs. I dont know why they are lying to us. hmmm
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LucidDreamer
LucidDreamerLv5

how much did your western BBC and fox news brainwash you ?

yahya_ishaq:How much did the ccp pay you 😂😂😂
Matrixkrock
MatrixkrockLv5

hey chill bro. it was just an sarcastic comment which went over your head i guess. i am an indian by the way. when did i ever mention usa in my comments. i just wanted a book with a neutral point of view but i guess its not possible here in webnovel

LucidDreamer:such big gal for you to talk .. its author is Chinese it obvious . its same everywhere why are you using ur western idiotic way and do you really think the world revolve around you people ?? in your games arab countires are terrorist zones and in your apocalypse movies it was always USA who always stands as last line of deference .. and Russia are always the main reason for world chaos ..
LucidDreamer
LucidDreamerLv5

i have no bad blood for you it just seeing such things a lot of times already made me think its too much already and already so toxic to hear.... "im not chinese "

Matrixkrock:hey chill bro. it was just an sarcastic comment which went over your head i guess. i am an indian by the way. when did i ever mention usa in my comments. i just wanted a book with a neutral point of view but i guess its not possible here in webnovel
yahya_ishaq
yahya_ishaqLv13

Im from sweeden i dont have bbc or fox news any Opinions i have i make after after i research that topic not blindly following my goverment for example the middle of the world is turkey just google it.

LucidDreamer:how much did your western BBC and fox news brainwash you ?
CREAZYMADMAN
CREAZYMADMANLv10

It's called cultural war, dude.

LucidDreamer:such big gal for you to talk .. its author is Chinese it obvious . its same everywhere why are you using ur western idiotic way and do you really think the world revolve around you people ?? in your games arab countires are terrorist zones and in your apocalypse movies it was always USA who always stands as last line of deference .. and Russia are always the main reason for world chaos ..
LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5

You guys are so lame, the only country I support is hentai land

needleworshipper
needleworshipperLv4

Anyone who sides with people that argues 2 + 2 = 5 has already been brainwashed. They just don't know it.

yahya_ishaq:Im from sweeden i dont have bbc or fox news any Opinions i have i make after after i research that topic not blindly following my goverment for example the middle of the world is turkey just google it.
screwyoujerks
screwyoujerksLv5

You go at the man like he curbed stomped a puppy assume his nationality, heck even his hemisphere, then you say no bad blood. Dont try to climb out of the ditch you made. And u cant affirmatively say I have never seen a comment where somebody complained about the book and their reasoning is "I'm not chinese." If your going to back peddle apologize for going forward in the first place. Otherwise it is clear to see your olive branch is just a retreat.

LucidDreamer:i have no bad blood for you it just seeing such things a lot of times already made me think its too much already and already so toxic to hear.... "im not chinese "
screwyoujerks
screwyoujerksLv5

I can affirmatively*

screwyoujerks:You go at the man like he curbed stomped a puppy assume his nationality, heck even his hemisphere, then you say no bad blood. Dont try to climb out of the ditch you made. And u cant affirmatively say I have never seen a comment where somebody complained about the book and their reasoning is "I'm not chinese." If your going to back peddle apologize for going forward in the first place. Otherwise it is clear to see your olive branch is just a retreat.
screwyoujerks
screwyoujerksLv5

I can affirmatively*

LucidDreamer:such big gal for you to talk .. its author is Chinese it obvious . its same everywhere why are you using ur western idiotic way and do you really think the world revolve around you people ?? in your games arab countires are terrorist zones and in your apocalypse movies it was always USA who always stands as last line of deference .. and Russia are always the main reason for world chaos ..
LucidDreamer
LucidDreamerLv5

its too obvious .. western people are the most racist people in the world specially about Asians or china whatsoever .. sometimes when you get used to see or hear something u expect it to be the same .. it not surprising if i say he is westerner although he is not but the way he act likes one

screwyoujerks:You go at the man like he curbed stomped a puppy assume his nationality, heck even his hemisphere, then you say no bad blood. Dont try to climb out of the ditch you made. And u cant affirmatively say I have never seen a comment where somebody complained about the book and their reasoning is "I'm not chinese." If your going to back peddle apologize for going forward in the first place. Otherwise it is clear to see your olive branch is just a retreat.
screwyoujerks
screwyoujerksLv5

If your referring to comment of people complaining king about there only being China and think that they are being racist. They are complaining because in western movies the heroes are all different nationalities and races. Western people reading. 1 race books unsurprisingly find it odd or annoying. Or are complaining about the fact that some chinese books happen to only give positives to Chinese people then frame people from any other country as rapists and villains. Yes that is the style of book and a culture difference. But doesnt mean people done have the right to complain.

LucidDreamer:its too obvious .. western people are the most racist people in the world specially about Asians or china whatsoever .. sometimes when you get used to see or hear something u expect it to be the same .. it not surprising if i say he is westerner although he is not but the way he act likes one
LucidDreamer
LucidDreamerLv5

i just annoying seeing people complaining that china did it did those etc. when in fact everybody do it ... just like in apocalypse when china only survivor its a big deal but in western movies its very frequent to see western countries being the only survivors in apocalypse ... also about the west being the enemy its a big deal but in western movies Russia and Iran china being enemy is normal ?? even in games Arab word are seen as terrorist infested area ...

screwyoujerks:If your referring to comment of people complaining king about there only being China and think that they are being racist. They are complaining because in western movies the heroes are all different nationalities and races. Western people reading. 1 race books unsurprisingly find it odd or annoying. Or are complaining about the fact that some chinese books happen to only give positives to Chinese people then frame people from any other country as rapists and villains. Yes that is the style of book and a culture difference. But doesnt mean people done have the right to complain.
screwyoujerks
screwyoujerksLv5

... you dont consume much media from america do you? In America for sure, all corporations in entertainment praise China and support what the CCP says. So no complaining about china in America (atleast main stream). Secondly atleast in every single zombie TV show/movie/game I have seen the are survivors all over the world surviving and succeeding. the MC might just be western. And yes there were alot of movies were russia was the villian... made during the cold war. In fact you see some movies sending the message of peace between the countries like Air Force One with Harrison Ford. I completely understand that you find it annoying that people complain about China, if you only see that and think they ignore western country issues. However since I see way more complaints about western countries within their own borders and they arent actively committing genocide. I see the complaints about the Chinese nationalist extremise as people just noting what they see. Since they are reading chinese books. Nobody would read a Russian book with issue then complain about stuff popular in Egypt. Also note about the mid-easterns countries. The videos games and movies are specifically set in the nation's which have an active terrorist organization. Sooo if you group all Arab countries into those few talked about, your kind of committing racist profiling...

LucidDreamer:i just annoying seeing people complaining that china did it did those etc. when in fact everybody do it ... just like in apocalypse when china only survivor its a big deal but in western movies its very frequent to see western countries being the only survivors in apocalypse ... also about the west being the enemy its a big deal but in western movies Russia and Iran china being enemy is normal ?? even in games Arab word are seen as terrorist infested area ...
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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

The major flaw of this novel is the MC. It is almost like there are two different people living inside him. The Master and the Child. The Master is calm and composed, remembers the life and experience of the alchemy emperor and is generally well adjusted. The Child appears every time the author needs to show just how awesome the MC or his Chinese heritage is. I really don't get why glorifying yourself and your country is such a big deal. The child is also a attention seeker. But, a split personality is not really a no go for a novel. The trouble starts when the Child does stupid things that only serve to delay the progress of the story as well as causing troubles for the Master to solve. In one moment the MC is composed and knows when to act, but in the next he seeks trouble everywhere. But don't take my word for it. Let me give you an example. MC needs to take a basic alchemy exam to be able to rent a furnace. It is a 24h available online only exam. What the MC needs to do is get it done. What he does is take the maximum number of available exams in one go. There is literally no benefit, as far as we and the MC at that point in time know, to taking more exams. But the child seeks attention. At school the avarage grade MC shows of knowledge about seals he should not know, but because of his lucky chance he is now a native speaker of the otherworldly language. As a result he gains scrutiny by his teacher and classmates, a rival who will continue to antagonize him and a possible one sided love interest. There is no benefit to standing out, no grades no additional resources. He literally does it to show off and embrace the class monitor (antagonist). The MC lack of common sense, the stupid attention seeking and his desperate pleas for other to notice his unusual increases in strength do not fit his background as a hard working poor student who is used to being disadvantaged. Anyone who has been overlooked and disadvantaged by the extended family and the public at large will gain at least a little bit of maturity and a sense of caution. Not to mention his father shows how to keep quiet while working towards a better future. Even the younger sister shows a very mature attitude. An attention seeker would have never had a good relationship with a disabled sibling who by default would have needed much more care and attention. All of this before the MC gained centuries of experience and knowledge. The idea and framework of the novel are wasted by the author because he desperately tries to increase word count by creating useless conflicts while regularly destroying his own characterization of the MC.

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MOONshadow_ · Eastern
4.8
141 Chs