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fireice_fireice
fireice_fireiceLv12yrfireice_fireice

the writing is fine, the explanation of the world too but to be honest your protagonist is really stupid, he believes the first thing they say to him also brings the zombies to work to beat them up, All this was quickly solved by giving a few coins or the company would take over easily, because the company is not his. but he does not say that he has everything planned and calculated, he boycotts himself when he sees that he brings beings that do not have identities and that a few drops of their blood could cause an infection and well you know what would happen next ... why did you say that this restricted, but that's if it doesn't bite or bleeds and infects others another world just like where it goes I like that he was ambitious, but protagonists who think they are smart and intelligent I like them, but if they say to themselves intelligent and they are not, they do more nonsense ... I don't know if you wanted to make it look funny or what, but that doesn't make sense. as a saying goes, it starts well and declines as the story goes this looks like a cliché of a chinese character

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Shadow_Gamer1
Shadow_Gamer1Lv4Shadow_Gamer1

wow,that's confusing