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MutedSith
MutedSithLv33yr
2021-03-15 10:16

It was an excellent Fan-Fic up until chapter 8, but the quality dropped off a fucking cliff afterwards. I’d suggest getting a beta, but I don’t even think that’ll fix that shit.

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UrAverageSkeleton
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EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

I agree. I don’t understand the point of transmigration in the story. It was basically useless. Good review.

Overlord_1000
Overlord_1000Lv4

you should read again because the mcs to find remembered and explained to himself why he lost them.

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