Review Detail of Sinful_sloth in MCU The Elder Scrolls

i have 3 major problems with this story. 1.) The chapters are short and most are just the author rambling on and never getting the point across 2.) The character has the power and personality of all of his elder scroll saves yet sheogorath is the main personality(would be fine if he actually used sheogorath personality and not just tell the story from an outside perspective without any of sheogoraths thoughts.) 3.)The pacing for this story is all over the place.