Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in Sword Chaser Child Of Darkness

A nice story with good execution of the plot. There has to be edited to be made as I have seen sentences that were not capitalized and periods or commas were absent when needed. This got potential by the way and I know the author will still grow in his path. Five stars for the effort and story proper! Haha, 🙈 Have a nice day! Glad I pointed it out.