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5 stars, all around. Since it's still a new one, I'll be adding by honest thoughts on how this fic would go, as well as an overview of how I rated it... Writing Quality: 5 - Little to no Grammar Mistakes, great storytelling, making good use of show, not tell, just please, don't make huge great walls of text, it hurts me eyes... Stability of Updates: 5 - Do I really need to say it? Story Development: 5 - Not fast, not slow, perfect pacing, and throws you in instantly, no questions asked. Not much information given, and readers can learn alongside MC! Great plus! Character Design: 5 - MC is a normal, relatable girl who was thrown into a f*cked up world she has no idea. Her reactions are a perfect suit for her, sometimes using dark humour as a way to cope (good eye for detail author). Supporting cast not yet detailed enough, but I hage antagonist already, so good job on that. World Background: 5 - Not enough info, need more chapters... Well there we go, anyway, I'll be stating my honest opinon. This fic as a lot of potential, clues are in place, MC is in a spot where she needs to act, and the supporting cast are with MC, whether they be evil or good, remains to be seen. Anyway, I'll be waiting for more, and I'll probably leave another review when it gets updated more...

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Thank you so much for your review and feedback! I really appreciate it and you make a very good point about the paragraphs. I will make them more user friendly / less strain on the eyes. Thank you for bringing it to my attention!