Review Detail of RoyalynDixon in The Demon Lord and his Hero (BL)

A rare book that’s written so good and hard to find. Especially a story of a Demon Lord in love with his Hero. Writing Quality - It’s amazing! It feels so real, I can feel the character’s emotions, I can understand what each character is thinking and it feels like I’m connecting with them as the story progresses. Grammar is minimal and easily overlooked because it just gets you so hooked. Story Development - In the first half of the free chapters, the development is slow and consistent. But then the second half, it’s inconsistent and there are loopholes. Timeskips are confusing because the ages get mixed up. Otherwise the story unravels the characters, their relationships, and there’s good character development. Character Design - Each character is unique in their own way, they feel alive because each have their own opinions and feelings. I love every single character (except ones that are made to be hated). Although I admit that some things in the first half was morally grey in terms of Syryn’s age (12/13) and how he interacted with guys a few years older but because technically he’s 100+yrs older in the body of a 13yr old makes it morally grey. Nothing explicit happens thankfully but it’s heavily implied that there are romantic relationships in development. Around chapter 70+ I think Syryn is 17, nearing a legal adult age (18) so readers are already expecting development of many male leads or at least one of them. World Building - It’s very good. There’s much to learn still but we understand how dark and awful the world is and how the weak suffer so much. We also learn that there are still good people there for those who feel like the world is against them. It’s heartwarming but at the same time I like how the author maintains their original character when Syryn was a demon lord. Syryn doesn’t care much for humans and he doesn’t go out hurting them unless they absolute deserve it or to protect those he cares for. He is still a demon and he makes it fairly clear. Considering how many chapters this story has, I’m sure the world will only become bigger. TLDR; Worth the read! Some things may irk you a bit since it gets real dark at times.