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WalterHeisenberg
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2022-02-07 11:23

I hate the fact that he’s too lazy and mature to think or do something about his situation. Like everything(not really)he has right now is something the author gave him behind the scenes with plot armor and WP, we don’t actually see a lot of stuff he did by himself and get stronger before his system activated and now he’s just getting everything but still weak in the process as he’s struggling to change and mature and actually have freedom from just following the senju. You could also get WP from other things that doesn’t involve the senju or uchiha, like prob go to a adventure and change a lot of history by possibly killing certain people or do something that will change lots of stuff if you know what I mean. Sorry for the rant but I’m just annoyed due to the fact that this had potential but is somewhat ruined due to the authors small view of the system and the mc’s age, cuz from where I am rn, his age has been somewhat irrelevant, I FEEL like the only reason it’s there is bc author wants him to be “EXPERIENCED “and have “WISDOM” but has ruined it as nothing changed with his personality or how he fights as he only shows some tricks from the future, idk what the authors motives are rn and ALL I AM SAYING RN ARE MY OPINION AND SHOULD BE TAKEN WITH A GRAIN OF SALT OF WHATEVER THE SAYING GOES .

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