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Yue_021
Yue_021Lv143yr
2021-07-08 22:57

To be honest this fanfiction has a lot of potential, the concept of starting his own village with advanced technology in narutoverse is personally very pleasing to me who loves kingdom building novels. But its sad to say that I was dissapointed when absurd and illogical things starts popping out everywhere. Furthermore, things were too fast paced and lot of things were skipped that could have made the novel longer. Like the part where there could have been development with his wife and since it was simply stated that he suddenly just had wife and stuff like that. The author could have slowed things down and develop things better. Even though my expectation were shattered, this fanfic was also fun in someway if you just accept everything. Even though my expectations of a good kingdom building novel inside the world of naruto were not met, it was still was a lot of fun reading this fanfiction. I would still recommend this fanfic to people as good wish fullfillment fanfic.

The Hidden Village: Naruto Fanfic(Finished)

LazyTanaka
4.5
66 Chs

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Tarou
TarouLv4

By no means am I hating on this fanfic. I liked the direction you were going with a new hidden village. But to me it seems that you’re obsessed with dragons. I wouldn’t mind the constant mentioning of dragons, if your mc had any other substance or personality other than ‘dragon village this, I’m the dragon king that’. The personalities seemed rushed and the pacing is way too fast for a fanfic of Naruto. We’re just suddenly thrown in Tanaka’s life without an explanation of any of his Powers/arsenal.

3yr

Legend_of_Poison99
Legend_of_Poison99Lv2

Ara~ It's LazyTanaka so no doubt about his work. Anyways, as long as he managed properly thr village then he can bring the #TruePeace that was yearned for by many different characters only to be attained using plot armor. KUKUKU. Like always, it is a great work from LazyTanaka~

3yr
EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

I’m really sorry but where is the Naruto FF here? From what it looks like you just use the naming sense in it. There is no plot or anything from the original but there is useless thing about shokugeki, deadly sins, JSDF gate and other mangas. Thi idea and beginning nice but the rest unfortunately a disappointment. I could count the original characters on one hand and the repeatable being Hasirama and Madara. To me this has almost nothing to do with Naruto and looking at story progresses he won’t even be born.

3yr
Demonzor
DemonzorLv14

Basic op naruto story where mc is basically the strongest by the 10 chapter. the only thing kinda cool is the village he made and him bringing stuff from other stories. Its okay if you have nothing else to read

3yr
darksoldier
darksoldierLv4

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more .....⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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EternalDragonO0
EternalDragonO0Lv3

Nice nice....very nice ...........................................................................................................................

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_Okami
_OkamiLv13

too lazy to write a review.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Legend_of_Poison99
Legend_of_Poison99Lv2

it is a legit fast-paced! a great story for starters kukuku. You can go f* Otsutsuki Parasites huuu. anyways, I hope there will be more kingdom-building.

3yr
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