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Lol_Man_7331Lv14yr
2021-03-29 14:42

Noice work man keep it up the but the grammar is not good enough you need to fix it and you need to ad some character development to skye she feels like a mobs in a anime

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WoofWoof
WoofWoofLv6

grammar where art thou? If you prefer your words to be close, go onwards. If you enjoy being more confused than author...read at own risk .

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BeiFeng
BeiFengLv5

ok I really haven't read this yet but just by the synopsis i can tell the grammar is going to be bad because it referred to the cheat ability in this novel as a golden finger😐 idk what it is but when a novel does this it normally means the author is going try there hardest to turn normal interactions and the plot to be like some xianxia with botched spelling and grammar

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Yasar_Azimi
Yasar_AzimiLv4

sorry, just thruth...........................................................................................................................

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Oppsie_Doopsie
Oppsie_DoopsieLv1

Nice story altough the grammar is well... Not good enough but still great work And theres another low review just because a grammar error and dont give a sh about other aspect just delete it

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Egika
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Waste of time, doesnt do anything to improve his life, is just sad seing him having problems and his thinking of i dont want problems but i will participate in the problem anyways

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OnlyMesha
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