Review Detail of Daydream_Wanderer in Second Life: Welcome to Gaia

My story is about a VRMMORPG with some common traits, but it also has its own characteristics. Because of this, I thought it necessary to describe some of the game mechanics for the readers do not to feel lost. As a gamer myself, I always have a difficult time understanding when a game novel showed numbers that don't make sense so I may have described a little too much about its details. And for me don't bore people to death, I began revising the first few chapters, trying to increase the writing quality and work more on the characters.