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Daydream_Wanderer
Daydream_WandererAuthor4yr
2021-02-26 09:09

My story is about a VRMMORPG with some common traits, but it also has its own characteristics. Because of this, I thought it necessary to describe some of the game mechanics for the readers do not to feel lost. As a gamer myself, I always have a difficult time understanding when a game novel showed numbers that don't make sense so I may have described a little too much about its details. And for me don't bore people to death, I began revising the first few chapters, trying to increase the writing quality and work more on the characters.

Second Life: Welcome to Gaia

Daydream_Wanderer
4.5
90 Chs

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AceDemon_343
AceDemon_343Lv10

There's a no harem tag but no romance tag while or won't there be a romance for mc

3yr
Daydream_Wanderer
Daydream_WandererAuthor

He will get a girlfriend someday, but it isn't the focus of the story.

AceDemon_343:There's a no harem tag but no romance tag while or won't there be a romance for mc
3yr
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UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11

me: pshh who need a girlfriend... also me holding back tears

Daydream_Wanderer:He will get a girlfriend someday, but it isn't the focus of the story.
3yr
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Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4

Are u a Chinese or someone else ? Cause. I don't wann any Chinese no 1 tag pls

3yr
Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4

Reply dude

Daydream_Wanderer:He will get a girlfriend someday, but it isn't the focus of the story.
3yr
Other Reviews
Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1

This is how you do a system novel. Very enjoyable and the author does a great job setting up the world and the characters before simply throwing the protagonist into the gaming world. Excellent world building, the author paints a picture so vividly of a fictional society in the near future. The protagonist is also a well-rounded character one can feel sympathy for. One who has had a bit of a rough go, losing his parents and floating through life without any real purpose. I look forward to seeing how he handles the gaming world. The story is also very well written and flows nicely, making for an all round enjoyable reading experience. Great effort!

4yr

Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11

An enjoyable novel you got here. Writing quality. The narratives were clear and nice. Story development. The introduction of the Second life was in-depth and detailed. Along with the items and skills which explained well. Character design. The characters have their own distinct personalities that make them unique to each other. The world background is well crafted. Overall, this book is a great read and definitely going to stay in my collections. Great work author!

4yr
CalypsoDay
CalypsoDayLv1

A new world and virtual reality! Seems like a great combo. Being a fan of videogames, I can easily say you've caught my attention. I liked the start of the story, and the writing style, and I will definitely check the rest of the story. Keep up!

4yr
TheBananaMan
TheBananaManLv14

Just caught up to the latest chapter. Can't wait for more. Writing Quality: Some grammar stuff. You can understand what is being said. Nothing too jarring, just needs a couple of passes for refinement/tidying up. Updates: Just caught up, so don't know the schedule. But the author seems to keep the readers in the know with Author's notes. Story Development: Standard gaming stuff. New game comes out, MC and friends start playing, dungeons/quests, meet new friends, repeat, etc. Mostly in-game progress, not much IRL progress except for mandatory logouts/rests. Characters: MC seems good. Has some quirks that his friends understand/playfully use against him. He has a history that I would like to know more of. Roommates need more fleshing out. But that maybe due to the MC not wanting to pry into his friends' personal lives. New set of guildmates have been introduces, will see how they mesh with everyone else. World Background: Standard VRMMORPG. Hyper-Intelligent Learning AI. NPCs that look/act real. Different areas/severs for every nation.

3yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!

4yr
AmateurAuthor
AmateurAuthorLv10

Very interesting and entertaining novel! Good story, solid character building, nice synopsis. This novel has a lot of potentials and I would recommend reading it for anyone. I hope the author will continue to release more chapters.

4yr
Kratsel
KratselLv2

Way too slow start, and so much information that is un-needed or uninteresting . You have to slog through 5 chapters to start the story, and by then you're already sick of the story.

3yr
Ttalker26
Ttalker26Lv3

Nice novel. Nice writing quality and story development. Character design needs a bit more work. We need to know a bit more about the other characters AKA his roommates. World Background is overused so I gave you a 3. Very nice novel though. You don't come across this types of novel very often.

3yr
escatologista
escatologistaLv1

I'm not that fond of stories like this, but reading Second Life: Welcome to Gaia has been quite enjoyable! I'm looking forward to see how the four friends will advance their adventure. [img=recommend]

4yr
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