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cloverqua
cloverquaLv14yr
2021-04-04 17:44

Hai, aku review pakai Bahasa ya Ide ceritanya menarik, jarang2 baca cerita transmigrasi latarnya kerajaan di Jawa 👍 Overall untuk pemilihan diksi English nya bagus, mudah dipahami. Saran untuk huruf kapital nama tokohnya diperhatikan lagi ya Semangat terus nulisnya, sukses untuk karyanya 🤗

Traveling to 13th Century

Sisca_sisi
5.0
89 Chs

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Sisca_sisi
Sisca_sisiAuthor

thanks review dan sarannya 🙏

4yr
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Sisca_sisi
Sisca_sisiAuthor

Hi Everyone, thank u for waiting. I still prepare for daily updates. Please keep this novel in your library, and I will share the update soon.

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Yanti_Wina
Yanti_WinaLv10

Interesting story, light but not boring. Tania's wish to have a strong and handsome boyfriend came true. But the King is like his classmate Ivan who is weak in 2021 😁 I hope Tania travel to the 13th century is fun.

4yr
Lika_FR
Lika_FRLv3

I Like it!!! this is the work. Suitable to accompany the day. This work also makes me came over to the ancient kingdom. Up Up Up more and more😍😍😍💖💖💖👌👌👌

4yr
Sisca_sisi
Sisca_sisiAuthor

hi everyone, thank you for reading this book. I have read your advice to check and improve the grammar. I have read back and checked the grammar, might be several sentences were missed when I checked. If you find the wrong grammar, please tell me by paragraph comment, if many sentences have wrong grammar, you can leave a comment only in one paragraph that has wrong grammar, then I will check. Thank you very much 🙏😊. I hope my grammar will be better.

4yr
Ogi_457
Ogi_457Lv11

This story is different and interesting because the background used is the Indonesian kingdom, there are rarely writers who want to bring this background to their stories, I add this story to my reading list, I hope the writer doesn't stop writing in the middle of the story

4yr
TreeBorn
TreeBornLv10

Nice…… A tomboy Girl going to past and trying to escape, i can't believe it a tomboy can be this cute 😂😂 the name is similar like my Friend in real life :v

4yr
MORAN94
MORAN94Lv3

waw, its interesting story, I think most of isekai story setting is always western or eastern culture, but its such a little bit different, love this one. i'll drop it to my library 👍👍👍 [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

4yr
hatentea
hatenteaLv3

Its interesting to see story that uses one of Indonesian Kingdom as a setting. The story feels funny because of how Tania act despite conspiracies in the kingdom. Looking forward for the rest of story!

4yr
Park_Keyza
Park_KeyzaLv10

The story is good sis, I don't really speak English but I know which way this story is going. this is really a cool story, continue to update sis ...

4yr
Aprilliaskm
AprilliaskmLv1

Ini Cerita bahasa inggris nya enteng bgt di baca engga yg susah2 bgt. dan pertama kali aku baca Novel berbahasa inggris. Semangat terus ya thor lanjutin ceritanya ... Aku suka aku sukaa

4yr
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