The writing and story is pretty fun. however we are only a handful of chapters in (13 or so I think), and for a bit if homophobia going. So just a warning friends.
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LIKEit was a very offending comment and wasn't one you even needed to add. by adding it and nothing positive you are promoting homophobic ideals even if it wasn't your intention. You could have literally said he was married and cheating on his spouse. instead it's "he's gay which is bad". that's not okay. I do hope you learn from this and do better in the future.
Yes, thanks for that. apologies as I can not change it anynore as this is a contracted novel. once a chapter has already been uploaded, we can only change very minoR details in the novel and can only edit some words. But I will make sure not To use that reference again in the future. Again, sorry and thanks for the Warning.
allily:it was a very offending comment and wasn't one you even needed to add. by adding it and nothing positive you are promoting homophobic ideals even if it wasn't your intention. You could have literally said he was married and cheating on his spouse. instead it's "he's gay which is bad". that's not okay. I do hope you learn from this and do better in the future.
allily:it's no problem. also if you wanted to make another character homomorphic in any other story, you'll want to show that there are accepting people first* so that you don't build the whole world into being homophobic. good luck with your story.