the beginning was promising, a year ago I read about 60 chapters and postponed this fic to read a couple hundred chapters in one gulp. And today I decided to read it, and I'm disappointed. the author has let all the potential down the drain. the author crossed out the romantic line (why give hope at the very beginning and take it away at the end!?). ms did not develop as a person in any way, just a lazy infusoria with the system. there was no development of other characters, only their killing and falling as personalities. the ending was completely š and uninteresting, it ended in a hurry and boring. this is the most disappointing fan fiction in my life. (((
Levaa
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LIKEThis is a translation of the chinese version... if you ever read more than one of this chinese novels mixed with more western leaning shows, you will see fast that it can be much worse... they have an habbit of mixing in cultivation terms, which make no sense at all in Naruto. For a chinese translations, this here is both in Plot and grammar ok.