Review Detail of Enigmation in Creating The Manga Of Naruto On Naruto World Become My Ultimate Goal!

Reviewed as of chp 65: WQ(2/5): I'll be frank, the translation quality isn't great. It needs quite a fair bit of work. Especially the grammar and sentence structures. Translating isn't easy especially from a work originally written in Japanese or Chinese. A lot of words and expressions are literally lost in translation. Translator gives a decent effort but more could be done to improve. SU(3/5): Pretty consistent. Not much else to say. Hence an average score. SD:(4/5): Plot-wise, this story is a pretty interesting take on being isekai-ed to Narutoverse. The setting starts out in a peaceful era after the first Shinobi WW, so the sannins are still in the academy and such. I love that the author incorporated the fall of the Uzumaki clan within the story rather than just an afterthought. CD(5/5): While the MC can be a bit frustrating at times, I find his character to fit somewhat as a slightly obsessed mangaka. He literally gets stronger and more versatile as a fighter with the points he gets from drawing manga so it fits. The side characters are great, absolutely adore grandma Mito. It would be interesting to see how MC deals with Danzo being his sensei. WB(4/5): Its Narutoverse, its deep enough for the author to pace out his story with more places and explorations. Overall, a very interesting take on naruto fanfic but the translation quality leaves a lot to be desired. Hope there is more improvement however, I haven't seen any yet.