Review Detail of Prommy_Halibut in Under Her Skin

I really, really enjoyed this story so far! It's so mysterious and intriguing that I couldn't put it down. I love the way you set up your scenes because it creates a nice flow and progression, one that's not too fast or too slow. The characters are also well developed so far, and I love it! Also your writing is far better than most on this site. It was like I was reading a hardcover book! Awesome job author!!!