This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!

Very nice! I love the characters and the idea for the plot is certainly intriguing! Some great world building going on right from the start. One thing I would say is that it perhaps lacks some more detailed description, and is very dialogue heavy. This isnt nessecarily a bad thing, just not so much my cup of tea. But I would certainly recommend for anyone looking for a fast paced action novel with fantasy woven throughout!

This is a great adventure story that moves at a cracking pace right from the get go. Colorful cast of characters who know each other well and interact naturally with each other. The unique powers and warrior classes and the fictional world are all portrayed very effectively and make logical sense. The story is well written, flows nicely and moves at a great speed to keep the reader turning pages. I was actually bummed out to get to the end of chapter 4 and run out content as I was having such a blast reading. There's also some pretty cool combat and action sequences. This is strongly recommended read for anyone who loves plenty of action and adventure. I was getting strong Zelda and even lord of rings vibes as I was reading this. Any potential readers need to give this one a shot, that's an order!

Quite a good novel this is. Review proper. Writing quality. Not many g-errors. The narratives were easy to read and for sure if you added more descriptive texts this will soar high. Story development is smooth and has a direction. Character design. The characters have their own set of personalities that make them distinct from each other. World background is written well. Overall this novel is already brimming with lots of potentials. I'll definitely keep this in my collections and see how it will grow more splendidly. Keep it up, author.