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Review Detail of IEatChildren in Shinobi From Hell

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IEatChildren
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Story starts off great, but... I came and saw the tags, such as #harem. I can say from the start when I started reading till chapter 17 that it should focus more on the MC because some readers just want to know on how the harem would usually start until it really becomes a 'harem'. This strange thought came to my mind that the male side characters were the harem of the MC, because the early chapters already started simultaneously detailing and focusing on the MC and the Side characters. Introduction of side characters came out quicker than what I thought, you could've just started slow with one. Other side characters at the start doesn't really give that much support in the start story of the MC. The story hooked me but stopped me from reading when the 2 male side characters started showing up, what is this? is this drama where a love triangle starts then goes to pentagon then octagon, so on... I just skimmed and scanned and was too lazy to actually read because wherever I stop and try to actually read, it starts in a place where the side character shows up. This gives vibes of Western and Eastern novel mixed together, that it makes me irritated when I think the about the negative points of both types of novel in one novel. I would like to continue reading, but giving this review, it's time for me to move on and go to other novels. - Still rooting for improvement 😊 -

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PillOfReverence
PillOfReverenceLv1PillOfReverence

Same thought came to mind, I was just about to comment the same thing. Yours gave more depth of what I didn't notice, thanks for giving your thoughts.

Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12Venom_God

Wow Thx for the review …i hate those types so thx for giving ur insight

Nadare17
Nadare17Lv4Nadare17

wuttt? ?? thanks for this review sir Im am not gonna read this

Rey_Yama
Rey_YamaLv1Rey_Yama

Good Review, thanks to you avoid wasting my time.

IlIlIlIlIl
IlIlIlIlIlLv3IlIlIlIlIl

thanks man I'm also disappointed without even having to read this book as I assumed the name would be meaning it would be scorpion from mortal kombat as the mc but I guess that was not meant to be