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This is pretty good ngl. I appreciate all gamer fanfics. Don't really have any problems with this so 5 star. .. . . .......... ... . .... .. .

Unbearable to read, i think this still need to be edited by someone who is really good in english or be translated from raw by a pro translator, its not much different than reading mtl its just slightly better.

great novel keep up the great work.............................................................................................................................................................................................................

The writing is so bad that after reading the entire first chapter, I still have no idea what's supposed to be happening... idk if it's just a terrible translation or if it's actually poorly written...

Im very dissapointed......................😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

the story is good but the mc is stupid[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Обновляй почаще! Хочу эту историю глав на 100 и больше! А то мало как-то только начал читать и уже конец! Обида! Исправьте имя героя в начале от этого я очень путался ... у него их было аж 3! С именем не определиться это странно. НО последний вариант Элайджа вполне неплох. Только исправьте!

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