Item: Harry Potter and the Chosen One
Rating: 4.4
Author: Pill_Guy

Pill_GuyLv23yr

2021-05-14 06:59

First things first, I love this fanfiction and send me energy from one author to another. You are doing great and don't let anyone bring you down. Critique time. The grammar, spelling, and formatting are a bit rough around the edges, but not to the point where you can't understand what is happening with at least an 8th grade reading level and some context clues. Although the technical aspect is a bit lacking, the content, flow, and emotion are off the charts. Such an endearing and emotional coming-of-age story. The MC is very gifted and talented because of her deep seeded fear of rejection. She has a lot of trauma but is actively working towards dealing with it. She is very cute and makes me smile. Best thing so far: Author doesn't follow the canon! I wish you the best and hope you can finish this story and take our lovely sweetheart Arya on more adventures through the multiverse!

Harry Potter and the Chosen One

Legacy_24

4.9

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Liked by 1 people

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Pill_GuyLv2

sending you energy* I'm a derp lol.

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Legacy_24Author

Thanks for your support ❤️

3yr

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