Review Detail of The_Young_Flash in Evolution System in High School of The Dead
Review detail
So far the story is cringy at best with the head pats and everything... It is well written and all but the character's personality and attitude are just off... The transition between emotional states is shitty so the author needs to find a balance. I can tell you are trying to write something complete, but you are constantly shifting between complete scenes and semi-complete scenes which makes the story hard to read. This is a nice read if you are bored and have patience, but it is not something you would read for fun or even to kill time because the author seems confused about the mood of this fanfic.
Evolution System in High School of The Dead
LastInkBender
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Point taken... Trust me this isn't a negative review yet... Haha... wait until someone starts cursing on the novel and you get into an argument that you think about for an entire week.... lml
LastInkBender:Wow my first negative-ish review! I appreciate the criticism, and I'll see to try and make it better. I strive to provide the best quality possible for my capabilities. Though... unless a horde of people complain, don't expect too much. After all I can't change my writing style based on one review.
When I see something stupid like a Beta MC comment or the like, or people giving orders as if they were writing the fic, I either ignore it or rant at the discord server, so I don't argue with them. I pretend to ignore them. If it is criticism, good or bad, or negative even, I take it in stride, because it is something I am doing good or can get better at. That is my mentality
The_Young_Flash:Point taken... Trust me this isn't a negative review yet... Haha... wait until someone starts cursing on the novel and you get into an argument that you think about for an entire week.... lml
LastInkBender:When I see something stupid like a Beta MC comment or the like, or people giving orders as if they were writing the fic, I either ignore it or rant at the discord server, so I don't argue with them. I pretend to ignore them. If it is criticism, good or bad, or negative even, I take it in stride, because it is something I am doing good or can get better at. That is my mentality
It's called a review ass*hole. STFU if you ain't got nothing to say but pick on people. I was offering my view, which could help the author improve his writing. I wasn't trying to throw shade or anything and the author took it pretty well. Take your weak *ss somewhere else if you can't review yourself and have to nit-pick at the review of others.
memelored:then just don't read if your complaining why the **** are you reading.image