Its alright to have typos or bad grammar. However, this fanfic is unreadable. Quite literally I spent three-fourths of my time rereading and even then every 5th paragraph or so just made no sense whatsoever.

I feel annoyed at this person for some reason....

Why did teuchci die? Teuchci can't die İ hate You →_→ →_→→_→→_→→_→→_→ (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ Teuchi (〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(〒﹏〒)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)(╥﹏╥)

I like the novel but i really am not a fan of adding other reincarnators to novels to create drama and danger for the MC. In my opinion, the Naruto world is dangerous enough and this isnt needed. I understand that you are trying to create something new which is appreciated, but I would rather read a Natuto stroy where other powers from anime and stuff are integrated into it vs a novel with a major story line about drama involving the god/gods that sent the MC to the world. I get it, i really do, but its just not for me. I have no interest in godly drama or an overarching plot about most probably some war of the gods or some divine duality issue. Its written well and the powers and card draws are cool, but for me after last chapter the wheels fell off. I wish you the best in this venture and hope that those who do enjoy the way the story is going continue to gove support.

No es uno de las mejores fan-fic hay muchos mejores, tampoco tiene la mejor ortografía, las actualización de los capítulos es un poco lenta pero cada capítulo es un poco largo creo yo (^_^)/ y mucho menos puede ser interesante para algunas personas pero es un trabajo honesto ('ε'*) hehehe. Solo puedo agradecer a todos los que lea mi historia ¡¡MUCHAS GRACIAS, me hace fantasía saber que hay gente leyendo mi propia novela enserio Arigato prro!! Como autor yo diría que tendría una calificación de 4/5 pero como los demás autores descarados me doy ánimo y me pongo 5 estrellas ◑.◑ .... ... .. . It is not one of the best fan-fictions there are many better ones, it does not have the best spelling either, the updating of the chapters is a bit slow but each chapter is a bit long I think (^ _ ^) / and much less can be interesting for some people but it's honest work ('ε' *) hehehe. I can only thank everyone who reads my story THANK YOU VERY MUCH, it makes me fantasy to know that people are reading my novel seriously Arigato dog!! As an author, I would say that it would have a rating of 4/5 but like the other cheeky authors, I cheer myself up and get 5 stars ◑.◑

👎

............................................................................................................................................

Pathetic author, did u just write this by getting bored cause I feel pretty bored while reading this novel. and how do u justify main character naivety is it u imagining in his place I think so. 😑

good story....but can barely understand what's going on when the author keeps changing from he to to she for one character....like why is it so hard to understand the difference from a man and woman...