this was an great read that shows a wide depth of knowledge, i just wish there wasnt so much exposition. in some places you can skip 3 chapters and it has no effect on the plot or your understanding of the arc
Hi, I'm writing an HP Fanfaction, it would help me a lot if you read it and comment what you think, you can find it on my profile or look for it as: Harry Potter: Narnia and the World Hidden in a Closet.