Review Detail of Venusean in A Personal Hell for A Winged Killer (Draft 1)

The prologue of this immediately sucks one in into mystery, and hopefully, as the chapter count expands, that mystery is fulfilled. The author exhibits clear control of the English language, making for a smooth reading experience, though slightly brought down by the occasional wall of text. As for the story and worldbuilding, I'd say that people who like superpower settings will appreciate this work, as it fits well into the quality expectations of the genre. Character design remains rather enigmatic, but some implicit signs of depth show potential for growth and fleshing out. Good job, author!