Review Detail of Akul in A Personal Hell for A Winged Killer (Draft 1)

I will try keep this short and simple (cus I talk more than I need most of the time lol) It's a very good story! I don't see any real issues with it, and the only (small) thing I thought should be improved was not repeated again, so that is amazing. I enjoyed reading it and wasn't bored out. There are no grammatical mistakes I have seen so you can be assured that when reading it will be fluid. Dialogues are concise yet informational and descriptions are vivid. I did not feel like wasting my time after reading the chapters and do not regret it at all. Will I continue reading this? Definitely. Have I added it to my library? Of course. Seriously, this is a hidden gem. Don't be fooled by the lack of book cover or if you don't necessarily like the synopsis. This is better than most within its' group!