Holy Fuck is this fic so bad, like god damn. The mc seems hella stupid in the beginning chapters like eating a pokemon before it hatches is against his morals? Has he not eaten eggs before? The whole beach scene is stupid as well like what pokemon would actually leave their eggs on some random beach especially shit like Caterpie. The constant need to make the mc go through life or death battles is so tiring as well. The author seems to make every pokemon some intelligent life form that it can comprehend stuff like getting its pride hurt. The straw that broke the camel's back for me is the Lotad encounter. I don't even lotad are even ambush predators and carnivores but if they were actually carnivores then I would assume them going after bug pokemon judging from their beak. All in all, I cant stand this fic.
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yup, i read ch 3. so many eggs, i thought it's only ekans, turned out, there are so many different types of pokemon eggs there. not natural. already comment about it. waiting for author's answer
