Review Detail of Dream_blue98 in Sate My Soul

The story has potential if develop properly. Writing quality of author can be concider as good. But I must say the story isin little fast phase. Author can be more discrptive in some parts to make it more realistic. character seems strong. but need more details to get more clear picture of their actions. World background is nice. all and all this is good story given this is a first story by author. There r chance of improvement but author can get his grip on it in time. good work 👍 keep it up