Review Detail of LordSputnik in A Possessive Mafia Leader

The Good: The characters interact well together and the author does an excellent job of showing how the world is despite limiting themselves to first-person. The Bad: First person and switching POV over and over is annoying. I can't seem to get used to it ever and it grates on me. The characters themselves are ridiculously overused... in every other romance novel. If I had to pick something that was slightly different it would be that the author put in two strong leads instead of one that is clearly dominant over the other. How did the ML keep the mafia family together after the parents passed? Might add a little bit more depth to him. Siena is too perfect... and maybe I missed something, but I feel like Siena has already fallen for the Neil without the need for blackmailing. I might be missing this part though because I didn't read into premium chapters. The Neutral: I know you spelled his name Neil, but by calling him Czar Neil I always read it in my head as 'Nil', the Russian variant of Neil. Just me being weird though. Also, if Siena is a singer/song-writer, you'd think Neil would have her songs stuck in his head with how obsessed he is with her. Once again, just me being weird. Good work though and hope you keep at it!