Review Detail of Xephotor in Omniversal Tournament: Just a Little Darker

Item: Omniversal Tournament: Just a Little Darker
Rating: 4.4

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XephotorLv123yrXephotor

The author has good sentence flow. Good sentence flow greatly improves the readability of a work and it shows here. The inner monologue is well placed within the writing. The work has no obvious grammar mistakes. I look forward to future chapters.

Omniversal Tournament: Just a Little Darker

dysplex

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dysplexAuthordysplex

Wow. A review. Okay, I was just writing my chapter and now that I look back at it's not up to the standard of the first chapter. I guess I'll go and fix it. Thank you for the review though.

3yr