I think usage of words could be improved a bit the names like lord of darkness or sentences like the final battle to end all the battles etc other than that the story is great would recommend everyone to give it a go.
Aradhya_Majumder
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LIKEthanks. actually the words Lords of Darkness, and battle to end all battles. its all told as if its an old tale told to children and passed down generations after generations during which the tale has gotten distorted and lost most details. so its purposefully made rather crude for that effect. And thanks so much for your support