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Review Detail of QueLeo in Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

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QueLeo
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Incredible grammar, very good character development, the story has coherence and is not rushed, the author knew how to handle the initial part (children of the MC) and now he is beginning to get involved in the chaos of war but here I give him 1 star in updates. Because the author does not warn if he is going to continue or it will be just a pause, he has us abandoned

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Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

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QueLeo
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childhood*