Review Detail of LuciferSatan_6666 in Star Wars: The Creation & Spawn System

i overall think this is a great story in the star wars universe the characters are good and in character the mc is a good guy but i hope we see him master the dark side and its power aswell,and maybe have him make his own version of the jedi that uses both sides to help defeat palpatines empire and maybe other stuff depending on the continuity.Things could be improved but overall a very good story and it is a shame it is not got a rating yet but that will come in time. I hope this is not dropped and that the author continues to improve and and make the mc have some challenges in life and to give the mc a concrete long term goal like immortality or something of that nature to strive for anyway that is about everything i feel needed to be said. And if the author is reading this don't let negative reviews get you down or upset you most are trolls and you can't please everyone but you don't have to.