Review Detail of star_expo in Life in Shinobi World (Naruto Fan-Fic)

Well your novel is good so I am giving yo 5 stars But I think you should improve your english I know its not your 1st language but at least you should try There is too much drama , I know its important for character to grow but in starting chapters its too much. you should try to do it a little less All in all I like your novel and keep up the good work