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Review Detail of BlaccLotus in Seen Zone Z

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The style of writing is pretty good, neat and quite good written. Both leads are well described especially Erin as the female lead and they're really interesting characters. Great dark vibes I might say, author is really good at writing the dark part and the action scene as I found myself immersed on it. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge every time. The story line is also so easy to follow and will trap you with its cliff hangers. The bad: It could be personal. The switching from first person to third person and back is a bit annoying. There are some grammar errors here and there, but nothing that would obstruct the readers from following the story. Good cover and synopsis will bring you more readers, the cover is really good for me personally but the synopsis is not, I don't know on pc version but on mobile app the synopsis is a bit too messy. I mean I think the usage of --------- is so unnecessary. "I love you" doesn't always mean "I will stay" —February 13, 11:59pm. Well that's it. My first read of zombie romance and it's enjoyable reading experience. Good luck to you.

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Seen Zone Z

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Thank you so much for this review. I mainly do everything on laptop. I'll fix the things you advise. Greatly appreciated all of this. Also if you're interested, We have a discord server for writers, and I would love to invite you there. If you're interested you could join through this link: https://discord.gg/x8bt2zGf We would be honored to have you there.