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Mila_Alaia
Mila_AlaiaLv43yrMila_Alaia

Well....I was hooked when I read the synopsis. It was something new, mysterious and made me curious. Then, I started reading. The story development is too good. Lucas and Erin.....aww so sweet💖😍 Loved how they met, how they escaped, how they remained together and how they became engaged. I would love to know more about them. Now let's get into what puts me off about this book: language. Grammar is a mess. Hope u will proofread it soon. After all the book has just got started. The story has great potential. As soon as you fix the grammar, imo this book will be super✨👍

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Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02AuthorAeipathy_02

Thank you so much, I'm so grateful to hear this. I would definitely fix the grammars to make the story better.

Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02AuthorAeipathy_02

Hi @Mila_Alaia, I've just recently started a server where readers and writers could exchange their ideas about their stories. And once we grow in numbers we could start too in helping to promote stories. If you are interested, you could join through this invite link: https://discord.gg/6kAaj3Jh I would be honored to have you there. And be grateful if you help us to build a community with readers and writers together.

Mila_Alaia
Mila_AlaiaLv4Mila_Alaia

Oh ys😇 I would love to.

Aeipathy_02:Hi @Mila_Alaia, I've just recently started a server where readers and writers could exchange their ideas about their stories. And once we grow in numbers we could start too in helping to promote stories. If you are interested, you could join through this invite link: https://discord.gg/6kAaj3Jh I would be honored to have you there. And be grateful if you help us to build a community with readers and writers together.
Mila_Alaia
Mila_AlaiaLv4Mila_Alaia

the invite has expired msg pops up😐

Aeipathy_02:Hi @Mila_Alaia, I've just recently started a server where readers and writers could exchange their ideas about their stories. And once we grow in numbers we could start too in helping to promote stories. If you are interested, you could join through this invite link: https://discord.gg/6kAaj3Jh I would be honored to have you there. And be grateful if you help us to build a community with readers and writers together.
Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02AuthorAeipathy_02

Oh wait, here's a new invite link: https://discord.gg/pD9qap2NWS

Mila_Alaia:the invite has expired msg pops up😐
Mila_Alaia
Mila_AlaiaLv4Mila_Alaia

got it 🤝🏻

Aeipathy_02:Oh wait, here's a new invite link: https://discord.gg/pD9qap2NWS