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balls_1124Author4yr
2021-03-19 22:42

Not going to give myself 5 stars because I'm not Shameless and I think it's my first time but if you want to give it a five star then go ahead if you give a lower amount go ahead and tell me why so that I can fix it and grow as an author. thank you.

An Esper's Game (Rewrite is up )

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balls_1124Author

rip the second part was meant to say that i had room to improve but now its there and i cant edit it

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GreedAF
GreedAFLv5

Uou a fellow follower of shiro-sama?!👏👏👏 I already like you😂😂

4yr
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balls_1124
balls_1124Author

yes

GreedAF:Uou a fellow follower of shiro-sama?!👏👏👏 I already like you😂😂
4yr
balls_1124
balls_1124Author

please note author is lazy

4yr
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R3vfor
R3vforLv4

The novel is decent at best(mediocre at worst), but the whole novel's main problem is that the MC has too much plot armor. I mean everything that happens is always so convenient for MC that there's no sense of accomplishment, take one for all for example the MC literally gets 100% usage cause of some BS. Don't even mention the servant's the MC summons literally having 100+ affection the movement they get summoned, I don't think I'd even be surprised if the MC suddenly summoned Gilgamesh out of nowhere and Gilgamesh literally starts respecting the MC for just existing and becoming sworn brothers. As for the plot, well there's no plot cause it's been around 20chapters already and MC just trains, spends time with his harem/daughters most of the time at home.

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Kutu
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4yr
Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

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conduit
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I like it, looking forward to where you take this. Got some serious potential, sadly there are many stories that squandered their potential. Hopefully you don't do the same.👍

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