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N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv24yr
2021-02-16 08:59

Unfortunately I didn't like this at all . Reasons: *I do not like the MC thinks ( too childish ) . *Too many " Time skips " ... In many ocasions it's too forced . *System nor properly explained+ emojis which adds to the absurd try of the author to make this more " visual " . * I do not like when the " system " has a mind of it's own and has a humoristic side which is nonsense as it's only a TOOL. *Many lines repeat themselves making the reading very unconfortable. * Unnecesary text * This is the worst of all for me : I'm 99% sure author is using the chinese cultivation bullsht idea. For me cultivation is the worst cancerous ff that could ever be . At least add a specification that this is cultivation so I don't waste time. The author tried to do something good but adding so many small things made a huge mess that I unfortunately didn't enjoy and will stop on the 6 chapter-

10 trillion karma reincarnation: kengan system in the Baki world

Rabidreader
4.5
34 Chs

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Rabidreader
RabidreaderAuthor

thanks for pointing out a lot of things it'll help me improve my writing skills I'm so sorry that you do not like it thanks again for your honesty review

4yr
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N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2

That's what makes us who we are . We are able to see and accept sometimes our errors and make the best out of it . Even if I sometimes say way too much and might even sound very rude and might hurt feelings, we are humans on the end of the day ( we aren't perfect at all ), we can only try our best and do more-

Rabidreader:thanks for pointing out a lot of things it'll help me improve my writing skills I'm so sorry that you do not like it thanks again for your honesty review
4yr
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Rabidreader
RabidreaderAuthor

Hello readers hope you have a nice day of course I gave myself a lot of five stars it maybe biased but it's myself hope you enjoy my story and thanks for providing a review

4yr

Weirdo
WeirdoLv6

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4yr
suicide_Elf
suicide_ElfLv3

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more.

4yr
Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv14

Am a massive fan of bake and ashura,but this fanfiction is the worst ones I've read soo far. problems: 1- the mc is a shi# show,tge mentality and the way he is progressing is absurd 2- the side characters are drafted as kindergarten characters 3- the original mc "Baki" is made out to be a dumb,stupid brute that has no common sense( am a massive baki fan) it irked me to read this 4- the system is way to overpowered etc hes learned and mastered skills of multiple ashura characters and he's not even midway through his teens. 5- there way more I could add but can't be bothered to list

4yr
Lasyandra
LasyandraLv4

you should made Baki system in Kengan Ashura instead.. Baki.. that was stupid, there's no clear goal.. only to become strongest.. entire anime only beating someone..

4yr
LordKram
LordKramLv13

I love it \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥

4yr
Machiel_schipper
Machiel_schipperLv4

Amazing story! Wil you include the pickel ark? Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it Love it

4yr
BrownOptometrist
BrownOptometristLv11

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

4yr
MILORD999
MILORD999Lv3

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4yr
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