Review Detail of Acylith in An Even Bigger Stain on My Profile

the worldbuilding of this world is steady; there's a lot to take in, but the concept is easily understandable, making the experience all the more richer. the author's writing is also exceptional, with vivid descriptions that made me picture the scene effortlessly. some things that could be polished on would be punctuation, but other than that this book is really well-written. keep it up, author!