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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE This novel was inspiring me to write! So far so good! I am sure this will pave well in the future as the author is talented. The story was eye-catching and hooking! Kudos! The author is better writer than me so I can't say much. 😉 ADVICE Some sentences are not starting with capital letters. I guess you should check it out.