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2021-03-02 17:48

A worthy read. Dig in the book while it is still free. I love Aiden and the love interests, not to mention the naggy Cassy, the story will not be complete without her presence. The dialogues are nice to read. Characters gave out oozes of mystery that lures me to know them more. Aiden makes my heart throb by his adorable responses. Thank you for writing the story, Kudos and fighting Author-sama!

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