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story ini sangat bagus. bahkan chapter di awal unsur suspense dapat meski berbalut fantasi modern. perlu ditingkatkan kualitas tulisan. terutama penggunaan tanda baca, elipsis dan dialog tag.

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Blue Wind: A Story About A Man Who's Trying To Change His Destiny

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