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Interesante historia, el autor logra captar la atención del lector con su escritura ya que es una historia cercana y fácil de comprender. Los personajes permiten enlazar muy bien la temática y el mensaje que quiere proyectar.

I have just started reading this story and till now have just read the first chapter but honestly the story plot is realy interesting,the introduction of the mc and the betrayal of his friend everything is unique on its own.Now I am waiting for something magical to happen ,maybe I would see it in chapter 2?

Waoh! Another great story with great imagination from dear friend/author. The synopsis and overall story is amazing. The writing flow has become lot better from before. Waiting for more chapters. All the best. I hope that your story win this contest. 🙂🙂

your story is excellent from the beginning , i can personally say you are very talented and i love the story , the characters are brilliant and it only makes one addicted to it good luck

Great the story keeps on getting interesting with so many new characters getting added. I actually like the protagonist of this story ,he is a lovable son a hard working person and a trustworthy fri end.

Excellent story from the very start. The author has a great writing skill that makes you addicted to the story from the onset and that's not common in many. Brilliant characters and very well written. I recommend this book to everyone on here. Thumbs up to the author for an superb piece of writing.

I feel sorry for the main character and hope all works out in his favor. You have a very professional way with words. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait to read more chapters. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]

your synopsis put a smile on my face by the way. your way of writing is something i find hard to describe. its big, and intriguing, dragging me in, your use words like you know their power and weight. you have done a great job, well done.

The book itself is a great masterpiece the author hardworked for. Each characters has definite style as well as how the author developed each. Of how he/she creates his/her own world. It's pretty amazing❤❤ Lovelots, Ciieee