Review Detail of gusdefrog in Cinderella's Spaceship

Thanks for reading!! [img=recommend] I can't quite believe that when I wrote down this story idea I thought it would be a light and fluffy tale. Oops. I'm trying to add lighter spots here and there, but it turns out that the original fairytale versions are all pretty dark too o-0. The genetic conflict going on in the background kind of developed itself as I added details into the background of my outline that focused mainly on the relationships.[img=coins] Even though I gave myself five stars on the writing quality, I have to admit that it's purely for effort. Many of these chapters have taken me days, or even weeks to write, as I recovered from my last Neurosurgery. Even though I've improved a lot, it's still a struggle.[img=coins]