Everything is way to fucking fast, the story come out so rapidly, and is so broken that it doesn't make really any sense. I get the premise but it is just to fast.
Xuli
Liked it!
LIKEOh that was intentional. Some of the informations are very important for later phaae of the story. For example, How Adel energy level was already at God level and like how Gia awoke. So to make the later phase more interesting I skipped the details. But you can suggest me the parts where it seems confusing and I will add the details there.
Write in more details and filler. in the first chapter you add alot of things that happen but not much information about anything.
Xuli:Should I make it slow then? Can you tell how to make it slow?