Review Detail of Hulla_Dig in The Frostcrown chronicles

It seems really good, not much go on right now, but it turn out to be good. I cant tell anything abou story development, but the character design seems Nice. A sarcastic main character is always great in my book. I dont know much about the World background, but it does have potential. There is a dew grammatical errors, but that Can always be changed. But in overall i Think it has potential and i am exited to read it further.