Review Detail of CalciumLurcher in MHA: Enderman

its too rushed, it feels like the author wrote it in the least amount of words possible, don't do that, take the time to describe the intricate details even if they're never going to be mentioned again (could have described the state of the room his computer was in, or the room he met God in) needs to describe the characters in detail, not like 'he had a white beard and looked old do descriptions like 'he had a white mane of hair flowing down his chest onto the pristine marble floors' the author needs to take the time to paint a picture with their words.